This is the edited version. I might try playing around with one of the other set ups that I tried to see if it's easier to read or just looks better.
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Week 11: Typography Midway Critique
Week 11: Typography Midway Critique
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I think your idea is really cool! When editing could you play with the levels to make the picture look sharper?