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I shot this photograph with several different arrangements, so I might try working with one of them instead. I also might try writing the "if you're struggling with procrastination" bigger and either removing the markers or adding the Sharpie I used to write on the paper.
I think that your edits look really good. I think that making the words on the paper bigger would help them stand out more. Separating out the words on the board a little could make it easier to read.