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I shot this photograph with several different arrangements, so I might try working with one of them instead. I also might try writing the "if you're struggling with procrastination" bigger and either removing the markers or adding the Sharpie I used to write on the paper.
I think that your edits look really good. I think that making the words on the paper bigger would help them stand out more. Separating out the words on the board a little could make it easier to read.
Hello! I really like the format and composition of your work! I like how you write the words on both the paper and the whiteboard! The brightness you change in photoshop looks very well! I think it would be better if you make the words on the paper bigger, so it will be easier to see. Maybe you could make all the purple words stand out more too. Thank you!