I think that I might want to try to do something different with the words so they don't feel as out of place.
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Week 11: Typography Midway Critique
Week 11: Typography Midway Critique
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I think that I might want to try to do something different with the words so they don't feel as out of place.
Isabelle, I love the way you have framed this image, but be sure your typography is created by hand, not in Photoshop. Thanks!
The picture is very well edited, and the light angles illuminate everything nicely! Good job on that! When viewing the picture, I interpret it as the dog is going to step off the landing to explore the unknown. If that's what you're going for, perhaps play that up by taking the photo from lower down to see more of the boundary between the "known" and "unknown" or take it from the dog's perspective to give a sense of the viewer venturing out like the dog?
Hello! I really like the lightness and composition in the picture. The dog looks very cute! Maybe it would be better if we relate the dog and the message more.